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I don't know how this happened, but I completely forgot to link to my smutty_claus fic this year. Better late than never, I guess. I had such fun writing this story. It was an idea that I've had in my head for YEARS, and I was finally given a prompt (and thus the push) to write it. Probably if you're going to read Ron/Pansy, you've already read this, but just in case:

Everything in this World: Ron/Pansy; 21,000 words; NC-17
Ron wakes up and the world is different.

Thank you to eviltish for the brit pick, and to flyingcarpet for the patient and thorough beta. ♥

Link to story.


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Feb. 3rd, 2010 03:40 am (UTC)
Holy cow! That was YOURS! I should have known--it was wonderful!
Mar. 7th, 2010 11:00 pm (UTC)
I've been very remiss in not commenting on this fic before - it's been on my "to read" list since it was posted (the first time), and I just got a chance to give it the careful read it deserves about a week ago.

The word that keeps coming to mind is masterpiece. It is skillfully crafted, well plotted and expertly paced. You revealed just what was needed , without too much embellishment, and the result was that I (like some other readers) were left with lots of questions - in a good way. Wondering what "the other Ron's" experience was like, or what things were like between Ron and Hermione after this Ron got back. Assuming that he did get back - your last line left that bit a little ambiguous, which was a lovely touch.

I'm not usually a fan of dystopias, but a dystopia where the interloper can improve the situation makes it - well, less dystopic. And, in true Ron fashion, he made things a lot better just by being himself.

As I was reading, I kept wondering if the sex would be believable, and of course, it was. But more than that, it was honest. You made those characters face what they were doing, accept the responsibility head on, and acknowledge the burden of living with the consequences. It would have been a completely wonderful fic without the sex, but this added another dimension that I really appreciated. I also loved Ron's ultimate criteria: no matter what, Hermione would want him to be happy.

Loved, loved, loved Harry and Ginny in this. How hard their life is, but how together they are, determined to keep trying. And you preserved the Harry/Ron friendship; the conversation between Ron and Harry about the last Horcrux was just perfect. You did such a nice job with the Gringotts break in too - it gave the whole fic a broader scope.

One of the very best fanfics I've read - ever.
Dec. 28th, 2011 01:07 pm (UTC)
wow, i just read all your ron-pansy stuff, and they are amazing. i was just checking ransy out to take a break from my usual fandoms, i thought they were crack... but you just made them so real.
why didn't you write anything about them this year?huhu
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