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Fic - "Watch As We Fall" | J2 | NC-17

Watch As We Fall
J2; Adult; 4200 words
The thing is, Jensen's really, really nice.

Notes: Thanks muchly to the ever awesome nu_breed and glendaglamazon for the betas. Two thumbs up. Will use again. This was written for my one-year anniversary of J2 fic. Yes, I'm self-involved enough that the only person I really write fic for is myself. Um, I hope you enjoy!

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pocketfullof
Aug. 25th, 2008 12:44 pm (UTC)
Something about Jensen being so TENSEN (<--haha, typo, but I'm leaving it) when Jared puts his hand on Jensen's thigh

I'm so glad you liked that, because I rewrote it, like, three times, and then ended up my first go around.

THANK YOU so much, hon! I'm so so pleased that you enjoyed this.
titti
Aug. 25th, 2008 01:02 pm (UTC)
This is so lovely. Great story.
pocketfullof
Aug. 25th, 2008 01:30 pm (UTC)
Oh! Thanks, hon! I'm so glad you liked it. :D
blynnk
Aug. 25th, 2008 01:29 pm (UTC)
I love how this story played out. It's like a dance or a love song between them, figuring out themselves and each other. I loved how overt Jared was with the touching and claiming of Jensen, but that Jensen was the one that understood what was happening. Beautiful work :D
pocketfullof
Aug. 25th, 2008 01:31 pm (UTC)
It's like a dance or a love song between them

Oh, that's a lovely way to describe this. I love that. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! :D
la_perkins
Aug. 25th, 2008 02:06 pm (UTC)
This is wonderful. I love how you have written the J's, and the adorkableness, and lots of other stuff.
pocketfullof
Aug. 25th, 2008 02:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. ♥
prmalscream
Aug. 25th, 2008 02:21 pm (UTC)
I love me some jealous Jared. This was awesome, Jen.
pocketfullof
Aug. 25th, 2008 02:27 pm (UTC)
I love me some jealous Jared.

Me, tooooooo

Thanks so much, hon!
gwenknight
Aug. 25th, 2008 02:32 pm (UTC)
Oh, I loved this soooo much. What a great way to fix a Monday work morning! Jealous Jared is always yummy. I love how Jensen just kind of lets him do his rescuing thing and patiently waits for Jared to have his "big gay epiphany", LOL....until he just sort of has to sigh and give him that little push. I loved the pace of this, so easy and smooth and it's like you're just watching it all play out. And you even gave Tommy some love, poor guy. :)

Just another example of why you're one of my favorite authors.
pocketfullof
Aug. 25th, 2008 03:22 pm (UTC)
Yay. Thank you so so much! I'm super pleased you enjoyed this. I had fun writing Jealous Jared. And Tommy - who I've never actually written before. I think I made him kind of a douche!


historiography
Aug. 25th, 2008 02:43 pm (UTC)
Haha, Jared, what a cockblock. This was great! <3
pocketfullof
Aug. 25th, 2008 03:22 pm (UTC)
HA! He totally is. Thanks, hon!
runedgirl
Aug. 25th, 2008 02:49 pm (UTC)
Yummy, love me a possessive but clueless Jared. Nicely done! :)
Hugs,
Lynsey
pocketfullof
Aug. 25th, 2008 03:23 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this. :D :D
enablelove
Aug. 25th, 2008 02:49 pm (UTC)
You have a way with words that is so amazing. Leaves me in awe sometimes.

This was SO MUCH LOVE! Awesome job :D
pocketfullof
Aug. 25th, 2008 03:23 pm (UTC)
*beams* What a lovely compliment. Thank you so so so much, hon! ♥
canyon_deye
Aug. 25th, 2008 03:30 pm (UTC)
OH YEAH.
This was amazing!
pocketfullof
Aug. 25th, 2008 03:52 pm (UTC)
Woot! Thank you! :D
thehighwaywoman
Aug. 25th, 2008 04:12 pm (UTC)
Oh my GOD, but this is made of unbelievably brilliant, giggle-inducing, heart-melting LOVE and WIN. Big ol' jealous-clueless-Jared and Jensen just quietly knowing where this is going and steering them there. *waves lighter about*

Edited at 2008-08-25 04:12 pm (UTC)
pocketfullof
Aug. 25th, 2008 06:19 pm (UTC)
Oh, man, thanks so much, honey! I'm so so glad you liked it. *waves lighter with you* Heeeee!
cherrymmm
Aug. 25th, 2008 04:32 pm (UTC)
Loved, loved, loved this! Perfect way to perk up my shitty Monday. Thank you!

Best line: "Did you fall and hurt your brain?" Heeee! I wanted to say that to my co-worker so bad.
pocketfullof
Aug. 25th, 2008 06:19 pm (UTC)
Ha! I added that line at the very last second because the conversation didn't seem funny enough. I'm soooo glad you liked it, and also glad this made your monday a bit better! Thank you!
certainthings
Aug. 25th, 2008 04:36 pm (UTC)
Bloody fantastic.
pocketfullof
Aug. 25th, 2008 06:20 pm (UTC)
Thanks! :D
lexzilla
Aug. 25th, 2008 05:23 pm (UTC)
This was so good. I love jealous!Jared and his not quite understanding of why he was being so 'grr hands off'. Loved it :D
pocketfullof
Aug. 25th, 2008 06:22 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much, hon! He is very grrrr-y in this, yeah? *pets him*
lillybette
Aug. 25th, 2008 05:56 pm (UTC)
Sex in the kitchen?
Yeah baby*giggles*

Thanks for sharing dear:-)
pocketfullof
Aug. 25th, 2008 06:23 pm (UTC)
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. :D
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