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Fic - "Watch As We Fall" | J2 | NC-17

Watch As We Fall
J2; Adult; 4200 words
The thing is, Jensen's really, really nice.

Notes: Thanks muchly to the ever awesome nu_breed and glendaglamazon for the betas. Two thumbs up. Will use again. This was written for my one-year anniversary of J2 fic. Yes, I'm self-involved enough that the only person I really write fic for is myself. Um, I hope you enjoy!

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stir_of_echoes
Aug. 25th, 2008 06:18 pm (UTC)
Gorgeous word play, and beautiful scenes. Just gorgeous all round :)
pocketfullof
Aug. 25th, 2008 06:24 pm (UTC)
Gorgeous word play

Oh, thanks so much. This was more... casual (or maybe conversational is the right word) than what I usually write, and I'm so glad that worked for you. It was a lot of fun!

:D :D
wendy
Aug. 25th, 2008 06:36 pm (UTC)
I love that both of them are sort of...push-pull through this whole thing. Letting each other figure it out on their own and ending up in the same place. Nice.
pocketfullof
Aug. 25th, 2008 07:41 pm (UTC)
Thanks, sweetie! I'm so glad you liked it - it was strangely easy for me to write.
fromyourashes
Aug. 25th, 2008 10:46 pm (UTC)
Love this, so much.
pocketfullof
Aug. 26th, 2008 09:48 am (UTC)
I'm glad! Thanks for letting me know. :D :D
causeways
Aug. 26th, 2008 12:50 am (UTC)
Aww, this was adorable.
pocketfullof
Aug. 26th, 2008 09:48 am (UTC)
Thanks! :D
essene
Aug. 26th, 2008 02:44 am (UTC)
*happy sigh*

Yeah, that's the stuff.
pocketfullof
Aug. 26th, 2008 09:48 am (UTC)
*beams* Glad you liked! Thanks for commenting. :D
aynslee
Aug. 26th, 2008 04:00 am (UTC)
Oh, I love it! :D What a lovely LJ anniversary celebration!
pocketfullof
Aug. 26th, 2008 09:49 am (UTC)
*bounces around* I thought so! Thanks so much for reading, honey! :D
anutty1
Aug. 26th, 2008 07:58 am (UTC)
LOVED this!! For such a short story it has this organic evolution that makes it feel bigger and wider than it actually is. Great job; thanks for sharing!
pocketfullof
Aug. 26th, 2008 09:50 am (UTC)
Oh, man, thank you so much! That's a lovely description. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment!
nameles_one
Aug. 26th, 2008 04:16 pm (UTC)
hi...
I really liked this, so well written :D

I kept wondering why guys were suddenly hitting on Jensen [ha! an interviewer actually asked both Js if they got hit on by gay men. Jared had a long rambling answer that included guys asking for autographs for their boyfriends, but was basically 'not that I'm aware of' and Jensen's answer was simply NO.] before I realized it was because he'd started flirting with guys. :D Maybe to test his attraction to non-Jared guys, and also give JP a clue?

thanks for sharing.
pocketfullof
Aug. 26th, 2008 04:53 pm (UTC)
Re: hi...
Thank you so much!

because he'd started flirting with guys.

Yeah, I think that had a lot to do with it; he was really testing the water. I tried to be pretty vague about the descriptions, but at least two of the guys were close to Jared's height, actually (in my mind, anyway).


audrarose
Aug. 27th, 2008 03:13 am (UTC)
:D:D:D:D:D

I absolutely, utterly ADORED this. Seriously, this is -- in so many ways -- exactly how I love the boys best. I love Jensen with a little mystery and Jared being so resigned about having to watch out for him *g*, and then all the sweet-hot of the ending... oh, yes. Wonderful! :D
pocketfullof
Aug. 27th, 2008 09:56 am (UTC)
Ah, man, I seriously adore everything you write, so this means a LOT to me. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment! I'm glad you liked it. *beams*
jamesinboots
Aug. 28th, 2008 02:23 am (UTC)
Aw, awwwwwwwwwww!!! So sweet and lovely, darlin. <3333333333333
pocketfullof
Aug. 28th, 2008 05:34 am (UTC)

\o/ \o/ Thanks, love!!
lazy_daze
Aug. 28th, 2008 10:55 pm (UTC)
*glee* this is such a slice of AWESOME. It feels epic and bigger than it is! Jared is so - *hands* and yes, incoherency. THIS IS SO HOW IT WOULD BEEEEEE. They are perfect, Jared is perfect, the big gay epiphany is perfect, I LOVE.
pocketfullof
Aug. 28th, 2008 11:19 pm (UTC)
*runs around in circles* I seriously adore your feedback, and this is WHY.

It feels epic and bigger than it is!
That's, like, an awesome compliment.

I'm so glad you liked it, schmoo face.
shinywhimsy
Aug. 30th, 2008 03:45 am (UTC)
Oh, this was just exactly what I needed tonight *happy sigh*
pocketfullof
Aug. 30th, 2008 11:20 am (UTC)
Yay! Glad you liked! :D :D
fioletova
Sep. 2nd, 2008 09:00 am (UTC)
I read the story some time ago and really liked it. So - sorry for not posting my thanks earlier. I'm seriously in love with your J2 here! Jared is so protective and a little bit jealous and, of course, he knows better what Jensen needs :D Except for the fact that he really doesn't and needs Jesnen to show him what it's all about. They are destined to be together :D
pocketfullof
Sep. 2nd, 2008 12:06 pm (UTC)
Oh! Thank you so much for taking the time to come back and tell me! It's means so much that you did. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :D
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pocketfullof
Sep. 3rd, 2008 10:18 am (UTC)
this totally made my heart dance the tango in my chest.

That was TOTALLY my plan! \o/ Thanks for commenting, hon!
jeyhawk
Sep. 3rd, 2008 09:51 am (UTC)
Awwww. That was lovely. *smishes them*
pocketfullof
Sep. 3rd, 2008 10:18 am (UTC)
I'm glad you liked, sweetie! Thank you!
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