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Fic - "Watch As We Fall" | J2 | NC-17

Watch As We Fall
J2; Adult; 4200 words
The thing is, Jensen's really, really nice.

Notes: Thanks muchly to the ever awesome nu_breed and glendaglamazon for the betas. Two thumbs up. Will use again. This was written for my one-year anniversary of J2 fic. Yes, I'm self-involved enough that the only person I really write fic for is myself. Um, I hope you enjoy!

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elethoniel
Sep. 3rd, 2008 12:36 pm (UTC)
Oh dude XD
This is such an awesome fic XDD
pocketfullof
Sep. 3rd, 2008 10:49 pm (UTC)
Thank you! :D
gottalovev
Sep. 3rd, 2008 01:21 pm (UTC)
d'awwww! jealous!jared is adorable. I loved it! :)
pocketfullof
Sep. 3rd, 2008 10:50 pm (UTC)
Isn't he? Thank you!
annkiri
Sep. 5th, 2008 03:02 am (UTC)
I just got around to reading this. So glad that I did. This is really lovely. The waiting and quietness of the beginning. I like how Jensen doesn't press Jared, even though he's going through his own changes and stuff, he still won't quite force it on Jared and it's not until Jared sort of forces the conversation that Jensen becomes confrontational. *loves*

I love the amount of dialog that isn't spoken and yet each word and thought is clear as day through the actions of each character. Really skillful work, hon.
pocketfullof
Sep. 9th, 2008 08:36 pm (UTC)
Oh, man, thanks so much, babe.

I love the amount of dialog that isn't spoken and yet each word and thought is clear as day through the actions of each character.
This is fabulous, and I'm glad you pointed it out, because I strive so much to let their actions speak, and sometimes I worry that I'm too subtle.

Thank you so much!
rejeneration
Sep. 6th, 2008 04:50 pm (UTC)
EEE, and I found it!!! \o/ Oh, hon, this is AMAZING. You have such a conversational style in your writing that is just down_to_earth, like pulling on your favorite pair of fresh from the dryer jeans. They're perfect in all the right places, fit every corner and curve, they're like a best friend. Your writing always makes me feel like that. Like it's as real as it gets and it's comfortable, you know?
pocketfullof
Sep. 9th, 2008 08:37 pm (UTC)
EEEEEEEEE back to you!

You have such a conversational style in your writing that is just down_to_earth,
Thank you so much. With this in particular, it was REALLY conversational, and I'm glad you liked it. I am annoyingly straightforward in real life, and I think it comes across sometimes. I'm glad it works for you.

*smooches*
moodswingers
Dec. 3rd, 2008 03:28 pm (UTC)
Ooooh so shiny and pretty and perfect. LOVED.
pocketfullof
Dec. 17th, 2008 11:58 am (UTC)
Thank you! :D :D :D
yukisherry
Dec. 4th, 2008 03:39 pm (UTC)
lovely. <3
pocketfullof
Dec. 4th, 2008 04:43 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
amy_star_
Jan. 29th, 2009 08:48 am (UTC)
I really liked this. Reccing it at spnroundtable.
pocketfullof
Jan. 29th, 2009 12:39 pm (UTC)
Oh, thank you! Glad you liked!
halfshellvenus
Feb. 8th, 2009 08:06 am (UTC)
This was fantastic. :D

I love that Jared's jealousy started up before he even realized what it was, and that even as he was crowding and half-cuddling up to Jensen he still didn't realize why he liked that so mcuh.

And Jensen's cool seriousness giving way to that vulnerability of really only wanting to be having that epiphany with Jared... Guh.

Plus, great description of the tantalizing touching in the bar, and the kissing and sex afterward.
pocketfullof
Apr. 18th, 2009 11:21 am (UTC)
Oh, goodness - I think there must be some law against responding to comments this late. BUT thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! :D :D
(no subject) - halfshellvenus - Apr. 18th, 2009 05:53 pm (UTC) - Expand
fanofsuper
Feb. 23rd, 2009 02:05 am (UTC)
That was great, Jared was so jealous & at first he didn't know why. Glad he figured it out
pocketfullof
Apr. 18th, 2009 11:21 am (UTC)
Oh, I didn't see this earlier. Thank you so much for letting me know you liked it!
(no subject) - fanofsuper - Apr. 19th, 2009 01:50 pm (UTC) - Expand
whimseywisp
Apr. 12th, 2009 06:50 am (UTC)
AWWWW :) :) :)

Jared being all possessive is like, 10 levels of HOT. GUH.
pocketfullof
Apr. 18th, 2009 11:20 am (UTC)
Thank you!
nightowl81
Apr. 22nd, 2009 04:48 pm (UTC)
That was amazing! And hot as hell! Love the boys being possessive/jealous, especially if it leads them to discovering their true feelings <3
pocketfullof
Oct. 13th, 2009 07:55 pm (UTC)
Yay! Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked!
nocturniquette1
May. 16th, 2009 04:27 am (UTC)
this was absolutely stellar.
I loved the confusion and near misses of wanting but not saying as much...
Excellent.
pocketfullof
Oct. 13th, 2009 07:56 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you, but thanks!
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pocketfullof
Oct. 13th, 2009 07:55 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
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pocketfullof
Oct. 20th, 2009 10:48 am (UTC)
Thank you!
fayedoll
Oct. 23rd, 2009 08:48 am (UTC)
D'awwwww so cute! :D And who wouldn't have a big gay epiphany for either one of them? ♥
pocketfullof
Oct. 29th, 2009 11:25 pm (UTC)
If I was a guy, I would SO be gay for them!

Thank you for reading!
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